Sunday, March 19, 2006

our symphony

i touch you softly at first
my fingers trickling over you
like eager spring waters
over welcoming stones

my hands are cool
but quickly warm
in my growing courage
and my strokes become stronger,
richer, more attuned to your needs

your response to my touch
becomes our harmony
as instrument and musician
are merged into one

how long i have dreamed of this
how deeply i have desired it
and now the dream is become

as though
we have always been truth
and in fact it is so

we become a melody
from now on
there will never be
a time when our tune does not exist
so much so
even a past without us

has obliterated
into the presence of our existence

and our song forever is

i want my hands nowhere
but now here
i want nothing but to pour out myself
into your receiving
and we shall forever be
our symphony

11 comments:

Cocaine Jesus said...

i think maybe i should invite you to contribute on my erotic site.
wow! this is good.
well done FEM EX.
x

Cherie! said...

....play on!

Cecilia said...

Erotic and Holy at the same time. Well done!

mermaid said...

The image of water spirits pouring over each other, and musician and instrument, show me that it was meant to be this way.

Nick Zegarac said...

The pleasures of the flesh revisited - a topic never easily tired of, perhaps because it remains the one tranquil oasis where pretext and pretension fade into obscurity and the true essence of our souls in frailty are suddenly revealed.

Cocaine Jesus said...

second visit still leaves me horny so i guess this really works.

Chai Anyone? said...

where have you disappeared to? hope all is well!

Cocaine Jesus said...

is that month up yet?

BohemeMama said...

Lovely. Evocative. Innerly.

Anonymous Poet said...

I love this. Sensual and reverent at the same time. Every word is succulent and decadent. There is no excess and nothing missing. It is exactly right. Just the way a symphony should be. You are a true symphony.

Delaleuverses said...

You pulled at the heartstrings with this poem, I love it, the emotions are high-up there, i'm simply floating.